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我翻看评论，看有说语句不通的，认真的想了一下。这应该是我没注意，用白话+普通话写的问题。

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我重读了几遍文章的，也注意到一些问题。

趁着书还不是太多章节，我打算全部精修一下，整到语句通顺，合理逻辑化一些人物，丰富人物形象。

今天返修，大概率应该是更新不了。

其实有些懒得再修改。

但我有能力做更好，就没必要将就。,authorWords:{t:},updateTimestamp:1653956105,isBuy:0,limitFree:0,eFW:0,ark:,isPubliode:1,fEnS:0},rewardI:2,todayt:1},refo:{weekt:211,disForward:1,disBackward:0,rank:1021,totaloInfo:{montht:161,disForward:0,disBackward:0,rank:5002},checkLevel:15,isPubliode:1,hasSubscribe:0,settings:,hasLite:false,bookActReward:{hitU:0,subscribeC:otF:0},abInfo:{abTextGroup:1}},msg:成功}